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author | Elijah Newren <newren@gmail.com> | 2023-10-08 06:45:03 +0000 |
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committer | Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com> | 2023-10-09 12:04:21 -0700 |
commit | cf6cac20059123d6ec3f867bb3692df62db52cf9 (patch) | |
tree | 99e0ee363183782b239257d69d28282c44100136 /Documentation/technical | |
parent | 3a06386e314565108ad56a9bdb8f7b80ac52fb69 (diff) | |
download | git-cf6cac20059123d6ec3f867bb3692df62db52cf9.tar.gz |
documentation: wording improvements
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Signed-off-by: Elijah Newren <newren@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Diffstat (limited to 'Documentation/technical')
-rw-r--r-- | Documentation/technical/api-simple-ipc.txt | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | Documentation/technical/bitmap-format.txt | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | Documentation/technical/parallel-checkout.txt | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | Documentation/technical/partial-clone.txt | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | Documentation/technical/racy-git.txt | 6 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | Documentation/technical/reftable.txt | 2 |
6 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/Documentation/technical/api-simple-ipc.txt b/Documentation/technical/api-simple-ipc.txt index d44ada98e7..6c127b5ddd 100644 --- a/Documentation/technical/api-simple-ipc.txt +++ b/Documentation/technical/api-simple-ipc.txt @@ -102,4 +102,4 @@ stateless request, receive an application-specific response, and disconnect. It is a one round trip facility for querying the server. The Simple-IPC routines hide the socket, named pipe, and thread pool details and allow the application -layer to focus on the application at hand. +layer to focus on the task at hand. diff --git a/Documentation/technical/bitmap-format.txt b/Documentation/technical/bitmap-format.txt index c2e652b71a..687c58cebc 100644 --- a/Documentation/technical/bitmap-format.txt +++ b/Documentation/technical/bitmap-format.txt @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ result in an empty bitmap (no bits set). * N entries with compressed bitmaps, one for each indexed commit + -Where `N` is the total amount of entries in this bitmap index. +Where `N` is the total number of entries in this bitmap index. Each entry contains the following: ** {empty} diff --git a/Documentation/technical/parallel-checkout.txt b/Documentation/technical/parallel-checkout.txt index 47c9b6183c..91a5eb26ef 100644 --- a/Documentation/technical/parallel-checkout.txt +++ b/Documentation/technical/parallel-checkout.txt @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ quite straightforward: for each parallel-eligible entry, the main process must remove all files that prevent this entry from being written (before enqueueing it). This includes any non-directory file in the leading path of the entry. Later, when a worker gets assigned the entry, -it looks again for the non-directories files and for an already existing +it looks again for the non-directory files and for an already existing file at the entry's path. If any of these checks finds something, the worker knows that there was a path collision. diff --git a/Documentation/technical/partial-clone.txt b/Documentation/technical/partial-clone.txt index 92fcee2bff..b01cff6912 100644 --- a/Documentation/technical/partial-clone.txt +++ b/Documentation/technical/partial-clone.txt @@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ Future Work - Improve the way to specify the order in which promisor remotes are tried. + -For example this could allow to specify explicitly something like: +For example this could allow specifying explicitly something like: "When fetching from this remote, I want to use these promisor remotes in this order, though, when pushing or fetching to that remote, I want to use those promisor remotes in that order." diff --git a/Documentation/technical/racy-git.txt b/Documentation/technical/racy-git.txt index ceda4bbfda..783e87e6aa 100644 --- a/Documentation/technical/racy-git.txt +++ b/Documentation/technical/racy-git.txt @@ -165,9 +165,9 @@ Avoiding runtime penalty In order to avoid the above runtime penalty, post 1.4.2 Git used to have a code that made sure the index file -got timestamp newer than the youngest files in the index when -there are many young files with the same timestamp as the -resulting index file would otherwise would have by waiting +got a timestamp newer than the youngest files in the index when +there were many young files with the same timestamp as the +resulting index file otherwise would have by waiting before finishing writing the index file out. I suspected that in practice the situation where many paths in the diff --git a/Documentation/technical/reftable.txt b/Documentation/technical/reftable.txt index 6a67cc4174..d7d066d876 100644 --- a/Documentation/technical/reftable.txt +++ b/Documentation/technical/reftable.txt @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ Varint encoding Varint encoding is identical to the ofs-delta encoding method used within pack files. -Decoder works such as: +Decoder works as follows: .... val = buf[ptr] & 0x7f |