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@@ -735,7 +735,7 @@ asciidoc.install();
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 <h1>Submitting Patches</h1>
-<span id="revdate">2023-10-23</span>
+<span id="revdate">2023-10-29</span>
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@@ -1179,8 +1179,8 @@ security relevant should be submitted privately to the Git Security
 mailing list<span class="footnote" id="_footnote_security-ml"><br />[The Git Security mailing list: <a href="mailto:git-security@googlegroups.com">git-security@googlegroups.com</a>]<br /></span>, instead of the public mailing list.</p></div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>Learn to use format-patch and send-email if possible.  These commands
 are optimized for the workflow of sending patches, avoiding many ways
-your existing e-mail client that is optimized for "multipart/*" mime
-type e-mails to corrupt and render your patches unusable.</p></div>
+your existing e-mail client (often optimized for "multipart/*" MIME
+type e-mails) might render your patches unusable.</p></div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>People on the Git mailing list need to be able to read and
 comment on the changes you are submitting.  It is important for
 a developer to be able to "quote" your changes, using standard
@@ -1300,8 +1300,8 @@ repositories.</p></div>
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-<pre><code>Those who are interested in improve gitk can volunteer to help Paul
-in maintaining it cf. &lt;YntxL/fTplFm8lr6@cleo&gt;.</code></pre>
+<pre><code>Those who are interested in improving gitk can volunteer to help Paul
+maintain it, cf. &lt;YntxL/fTplFm8lr6@cleo&gt;.</code></pre>
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@@ -1367,7 +1367,7 @@ A topic branch is created with the patch and is merged to <code>next</code>,
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 <div class="paragraph"><p>In any time between the (2)-(3) cycle, the maintainer may pick it up
 from the list and queue it to <code>seen</code>, in order to make it easier for
-people play with it without having to pick up and apply the patch to
+people to play with it without having to pick up and apply the patch to
 their trees themselves.</p></div>
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@@ -1518,7 +1518,7 @@ this problem around.</p></div>
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 Last updated
- 2023-10-23 14:43:47 PDT
+ 2023-10-30 08:42:01 JST
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